After a meeting on the 5th, we received feedback on how to improve our opening sequence edit:- Need to fix the beginning bit of the first pan's speed
- The beginning montage cuts in then out then in again - make the progression in smoother
- Move 1st and 3rd (rooftops) title down a bit
- Move 2nd (London eye) title up
- Titles shouldn't be so synchronised to the cuts
- If the 'Emily Lawson' title is on the bench you have to do the same all the way through
- In the pan up to the sunrise you can't see that it is a bucket list you need a shot to anchor it
- Cut the sunrise pan round because of the horrible zoom out
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